Part 1 - Dave Gives Kathy Some Time and Space
Dave's mom had sworn Kathy would regret leaving Dave, but her life seems to continue on course. Dave is struggling to get his life back together. Luckily he has good friends to help him along.
INT. LIMOUSINE - NIGHT
Kathy is making out with some long-haired rock star. Her blouse is unbuttoned and her hair is a mess. As she pulls the man down on her, she presses the button raising the smoked glass partition and we can only her laughter.
INT. ALLY’S APARTMENT - DAY
We see a small , two bedroom apartment that is still is the process of being moved into: curtains are not hung, framed pictures lean up against the wall . On the couch sits ALLY BURNS, Kathy’s old college friend. She is pretty, with no makeup; her hair is pulled into a pony tail, dressed in jeans and an old sweatshirt . Ally is STRUMMING a guitar softly and singing. She stops and sings the same line again but changes a word. She stops again and writes
something down and plays it again.
Suddenly, the bedroom door behind her BURSTS open and Kathy comes out. She is in pajamas, an eyeshade and her hair is a mess.
KATHY
Do you have to play that thing soearly?
ALLY
It’s after twelve.KATHY
When you’re up with clients ti l l 4 am,this is the crack of dawn.
ALLY
You’re only up until 4 because youare blowing them in the back of the
limo.
KATHY
It’s my job.ALLY
Kathy, this is my job. I need to writemusic.
KATHY
Well can you maybe do your jobsomeplace else? Doesn’t your
building have a roof, or a basement?
Kathy turns and goes back into the darkened bedroom, SLAMMING the door behind her.
EXT. FIRE ESCAPE – DAY
Ally is writing a song on the fire escape. Kathy appears at the open window and slams it without even looking at Ally.
ALLY
Bitch.Ally strums a power chord. Then pauses and writes down the word “Bitch”.
INT. DAVE’S COLLEGE OFFICE - DAY
Dave in his cluttered office. On the wall hang pictures of African tribesmen, Thai dancers and Inuit hunters. He is in the middle of a discussion with one of his students, a disheveled young man.
DISHEVELED STUDENT
I don’ t see why I should lose marksfor that answer.
DAVE
How about “because it’s wrong”.DISHEVELED STUDENT
Yes, but you never covered this inclass.
DAVE
Logan, it was part of the assigned
reading.
DISHEVELED STUDENT
You never said assigned reading wasgoing to be on the exam.
DAVE
I shouldn't have to. I would thinka source related to anthropology
I assigned in my anthropology course
would have been reason enough for my
students to learn it . Logan, have I
asked you to read any articles about
marine biology?
DISHEVELED STUDENT
No.DAVE
What about statistics, orRenaissance French poetry?
DISHEVELED STUDENT
No.(pause)
But it’s not fair.
DAVE
(sighs)
Tell you what. Redo the answer bytomorrow and I ’l l reconsider the
grade.
DISHEVELED STUDENT
Aww, tomorrow?DAVE
And make it twice as long. If you'restill here in 10 seconds it’ll be
worth only 50%.
The student reluctantly stuffs the exam paper in his knapsack and leaves.
Alone Dave taps on the desk and re-arranges some piles of papers before he decides to call Kathy. He picks up the phone and dials six numbers. He hesitates before dialing the last, exhales and presses the seventh digit. As soon as it starts to ring he regrets it and motions to hang up when the door OPENS. Dave’s best friend STEVE CHAN enters.
STEVE
Stop! Don’t be a pussy.DAVE
What?STEVE
You heard me Pussy. You are callingher aren’t you?
He grabs the receiver from Dave’s hand. We can hear Kathy saying “Hello” on the receiver. She swears and hangs up.
DAVE
I must have dialed her by accident. Iwas trying to cal l you
STEVE
You can’t do this man. She tookyour fucking towel rods. What kind
of a cold bitch does that? Don’t
make the Pity Cal l .
DAVE
The what?STEVE
( in sad voice)
Hi , I’ve been thinking we should gettogether…sometime…maybe coffee.
Sure, we can be friends.
(normal voice)
Next thing you know you’re holding
flowers in the bridal party when she
marries the guy she sat next to
when you two went for coffee.
DAVE
That would never happen.STEVE
Right. How many girl friends do youhave right now?
DAVE
None.STEVE
And how many ex-girl friends you“think” you are still friends with?
DAVE
Six.STEVE
Pussy.Steve smacks Dave on the back of the head.
STEVE (CONT’D)
Now let’s go. You, me, Picken andToynebee have tickets to the Baron’s
game tonight. Let’s see if we can get
your head out of your ass and in
between some chick’s legs.
They leave just as an older female professor walks by. She is shocked at the mention of “some chick’s legs”.
INT. HOCKEY ARENA – NIGHT
Dave is out at a game with Steve, and his other two friends JAMES PICKEN and RYAN TOYNEBEE. The quartet are right at the glass. The three friends are cheering the body checks and fights but not Dave. Beer is flying, but Dave doesn’t notice.
Two players race for the puck and slam into the end boards right in front of Dave and the gang. The referee blows his whistle on the icing cal l as the two players slowly slide down the glass and
col lapse on the ice. Picken, Toynebee and Steve high five-ing each other. Steve turns to
high five Dave, but Dave is not paying attention.
PICKEN
Are you going to the can?TOYNEBEE
No.PICKEN
You sure? You haven’t gone in awhile.
TOYNEBEE
You keeping track?PICKEN
I don’ t want you to get a bladderinfection, so don’t let it go too long.
And when you do go…
TOYNEBEE
Yeah?PICKEN
You could get me another beer.TOYNEBEE
Are your legs broken?VOICE ON LOUDSPEAKER
Alright everybody, it’s time for“Pucker Up” brought to you by
LavaLife.com. Let’s see which couple
can really pour on the heat.
On the Jumbo-tron appear images of couples in the crowd who kiss when the camera comes on them.
VOICE ON LOUDSPEAKER (CONT’D)
C’mon lets hear it for these folks!Dave looks up and watches as a mix of people, young and old, kiss. Some are polite pecks but one middle aged fat couple really go at it, to the delight of the crowd.
Dave sighs and rises to go to the bathroom. He squeezes past his buddies.
PICKEN
Beer me!STEVE
Me too.TOYNEBEE
Make it two.PICKEN
And nachos!Dave casually waves in acknowledgment, but does not look up.
TOYNEBEE
Fuck, is he ever a downer.PICKEN
Tragic.STEVE
We really should do something.TOYNEBEE
Like what? We’ve tried drinking, andsports.
PICKEN
And dirty internet jokes.STEVE
Gentlemen, there’s a force more
powerful than pornography and
alcohol alone. Depression’s
kryptonite – strippers.
The Barons score and the crowd cheers – but they could be endorsing the idea of strippers; it’s not clear.
EXT. URBAN STREET – NIGHT
Dave, Steve, Picken and Toynebee are walking along the street after the game. Dave is still glum, but Picken and Toynebee are sti l l high from the Baron’s win. Picken has a big foam hand that says “Barons #1”. Toynebee has two area beers in his hands.
A car goes by with a Barons flag and honks at the group. Picken jogs a couple of paces as the car goes past.
PICKEN
Fucking right!TOYNEBEE
Barons rule! Whoo-hoo.PICKEN
Damn! Those chicks were hot.STEVE
It was a guy and a dog.PICKEN
You sure?Steve does not answer him. Picken stops to stare after the car, sure it was a load of 'hot chicks'.
TOYNEBEE
Sounds about your speed Picken.Just make sure they at least buy
you dinner before you put out.
Steve puts his arm around Dave’s shoulder.
STEVE
How you doing buddy?DAVE
If I wasn’t depressed before, thethought of Picken in some
Appalachian Lassie-love-fest pay-per-view
special would put a guy over the
edge.
STEVE
Not to worry. The doctor is here withthe cure. You remember my former
business partner John?
DAVE
The loser you sold Glow-Ropes with?STEVE
No. Not him. I think he’s dead or inParaguay or something.
TOYNEBEE
You mean Juice Cart Guy?PICKEN
Man, I hated that weasel .STEVE
Well , his brother’s getting marriedthis weekend, and there is a get-together
at Teasers on Wednesday. I
think a little lap dancing and hooter
ogling might just turn that frown
upside down.
DAVE
Of I don’t know. That’s not really myscene…
STEVE
What scene is that , the gay scene?DAVE
Would that bother you?TOYNEBEE
Not as much as that shirt does.STEVE
Of course it’s your scene. You stillhave a dick don’t you?
Picken and Toynebee grab Dave’s arms, pick him up and pin him to the wall.
TOYNEBEE
You have to say yes.PICKEN
You are ruining my karma, man.Snap out of it or we’ll have to snap
you.
DAVE
Okay, okay. We’ll go see peelers.PICKEN
Alright then.They let Dave down.
STEVE
Did you just say Karma?PICKEN
STEVE
Fag.
3 comments:
I'm really drawn in. I can literally picture the scenes in my mind. Keep 'em coming!
Thanks for the e-support Mama D. I'll post Part 3 this weekend.
DAMN!@*^%$ I started reading before my popcorn was ready! It should be done in time for part 3.
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