Part 1 - Dave Gives Kathy Some Time and Space
Part 2 - Kathy Moves On But Dave Needs a Push
Part 3 - A Day at the Campus, A Night at the Strip Club
Part 4 - A Cute Meet Before the Scales Fall
Part 5 - Dave Morgan: Man of Action
Dave and Ally's relationship builds, but how till they explain it to Kathy?
INT./EXT. VARIOUS LOCATIONS - MONTAGE
We see a dating montage set to music. Dave and Ally listen to records (yes records) , eat hot dogs, walk in the park, go to a hockey game. It is all very innocent. They do not even hold hands. At the same time, we see a contrast of Kathy on her trip. She is out at bars and dance clubs, drinking and surrounded by guys.
INT. COFFEE SHOP - AFTERNOON
Al y is just finishing her set at the coffee shop to enthusiastic applause. She is beginning to garner a bit of a following.
tomorrow at the same time, and
hopefully you will too.
She puts down her guitar walks over to Dave who is standing clapping.
when you go off key or forget the
words.
been hit by sick nuns with more jam
than you.
Oh, I ’d drop you like the ratings on
“Joey”.
The two pretend to spar for moment before breaking into laughter and sitting down on a couch. Dave hands her a tea.
She leans in close as she pays him a compliment.
Enough! Just shut up and kiss me.
(beat)
Oh!
Sweetly, Dave and Ally share their first kiss.
Through the window behind them we see Kathy walk past. She stops when she sees the couple kiss. She takes out her cell phone and dials.
SPECIAL EFFECT
We see a package of electronic data zip along a network of wires and out to an Internet web site called “Drunk Dialing”.
INT. COLLEGE CLASSROOM - DAY
In a contrast to his class from a week ago, Dave is teaching with energy. He has multiple media going: film, sound, PowerPoint. In the darkness we see the students frantically trying to keep up.
Here we see the percentage of
polygamous cultures contrasted with
the percentage of polyandrous
cultures. Now what would you
expect when we overlay that with
those culture that track heredity
through matriarchal lines verses
patriarchal?
The class is speechless and the graphs on the screen merge and change as if by magic.
EXT. CITY STREET - NIGHT AT THE CLUB
Dave and Ally are walking down the street, hand in hand.
Are you going to tell me where we’re
going?
DAVE
seen the One Hit Wonders?
school . Those guys aren’t still
playing together are they?
changed at all.
They pass by Picken’s RV sitting out in front of the club. They enter.
INT. NIGHT CLUB – NIGHT
We see a crowded night club. Dave and Ally are dancing to the band playing Tommy Twotone’s “867-5309 Jenny”. And on stage we see, Steve, Picken and Toynebee playing under a banner that reads “The One Hit Wonders”. The song comes to an end and the crowd hoots and hollers.
to rock. We’re going to take a fifteen
minute break.
The guys leave the stage and join Dave and Ally at a table.
ALLY
school .
TOYNEBEE
ALLY
songs too.
STEVE
PICKEN
more songs from Journey or
Foreigner.
TOYNEBEE
are not one hit wonders. We’re ‘The
One Hit Wonders’, not Two Hit or
Three Hits.
DAVE
with you.
STEVE, TOYNEBEE & PICKEN
DAVE
TOYNEBEE
DAVE
like, like Amy Mann.
ALLY
DAVE
shows.
INT. ALLY’S APARTMENT HALLWAY – NIGHT
Dave and Al ly are kissing passionately in the hallway. They can’t keep their hands off each other as they bang from wall to wall, grabbing at each other. They make it to the door.
to come in? You can use the door
this time.
ALLY
you do in the sack.
Dave is speechless. They go in.
INT. AMY’S APARTMENT - NIGHT
Dave and Ally enter locked in an embrace. They start to pull each other's clothes off. We see Kathy sitting casually on the couch dressed in an expensive suit, sipping a glass of wine silently watching them make out.
this.
KATHY
out well but it's really just false
advertising.
ALLY & DAVE
ALLY
tomorrow.
KATHY
benefit.
DAVE
games remember?
KATHY
you two is it? Soccer? Table tennis?
Let me warn you Ally. His paddle is
less than regulation size.
DAVE
my place.
Kathy puts down her wine glass and rises.
anyway. And tomorrow I ’m signing
the lease on this great new loft, so I
won’t be a burden Ally. Or stand in
the way of your great new love.
With drama, she sweeps out the door.
Dave rushes to the door and shouts down the hall after Kathy
switch plates. And my cutlery!
Ally takes him by the hand and pulls him back into the apartment.
curious to know if the package she’s
talking about is less than what ’s
advertised.
ALLY
told I ’m excellent at it. Want to see?
DAVE
Ally leads him into the bedroom and shuts the door.
4 comments:
Hmmmm...I'm getting more of a feel for Ally now. I need to do some googling.
Katherine Heigl seems to brittle to me for this part.....yeah, it's gonna take some thinking.
Anxiously awaiting part 7!
...7 please.
Part Seven is up. Don't ever say I don't do as I'm asked.
Ive put off reading this all week, didnt know what I would think, I love reading and started Part 1 at work, came home and couldnt wait to read the rest - ABSOLUTELY SENSATIONALS, I would so pay to see this movie.
Im not blowing smoke up your ass, it really is good, Cant wait to read the next Chapter.
Well done!!!
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